Fills Post

Jul. 22nd, 2020 10:07 am
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This Fills Post is now closed to new fills. New fills should go in Fills Post #2. For those of you who are in the process of posting multi-chapter WIPs, please post subsequent chapters in the new Fills Post but include a link to the previous chapters so that those who haven't been following the story from the beginning can easily find the first part(s). 

Remember:

Fills can but don't need to be anonymous. 

Start a new comment for each fill. Don't use threaded comments for new fills. Threaded comments are for fills that take up more than one comment field, or for feedback/squee/praise.

In your fill, please mention the prompt you are responding to, and provide a link to the prompt in the body of the text. 

Please use a header with your character(s)/pairing and a title and/or keyword or short phrase. (For example: "Just you and me: Andy/Quynh, Make-up sex" or "Between a Rock and A Hard Place: Nicky/Joe/Booker, first time DP"). 

Please also comment with a link to your fill in the prompt post, under the prompt you are responding to. Your comment header should include the word "Fill" or "Filled", so that those checking out the thread can find your fic/art more easily (For example: "FILL: Re: Any/Quynh, Make-up sex").

If you end up cleaning up your fill and posting it elsewhere (AO3, your personal journal), feel free to link the posted fic/art here as well.

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From: (Anonymous)
OP here - best of luck with moving and your new home! Please don't worry about frequency of updates, you'll get to it when you can. Though I do know that writing/publishing and getting comments does help in difficult times (I don't care there's worse, moving definitely qualifies in my book.)

> the chapter where Nicky tries to keep his heart in his pants' (or maybe out of his pants, whichever)

Can this please be the official chapter title/chapter summary? Because it's absolutely perfect.


I loved Nicolò getting lost in his own head - it's very him. Berating himself for his own greed? Beautiful. I really appreciate his view on temptation (i.e. if you decide to do it after all don't moan and groan about it after) and the "running down a hill" metaphor, especially how you reprised it later.
I just love the way you write them, I hope you won't mind hearing it for every single chapter.

Also, we got more bantering! I may be low key envious of your ability to write bantering. It's absolutely awesome!

Question: is Leandro the same guys as Lazzaro from the previous chapters?

I do like the glimpses into Nicolò's past and that his story with Leandro was complex. Loved that Leandro got dunked in the water, too!

Oooh, the sex part was just... *fans self*. Look at Yusuf rules lawyer-ing again! The two of them getting tying themselves in knots!!! Oh wow, the yearning!

> With an act of will to anchor earthquakes, he does not.

This sentence was my absolute favorite. Also "desperate devotion to Yusuf" from the line before, it's just too beautiful.

Loved the post-coital cuddling and confidences and Nicolò's lines about Yusuf's experience with a woman (both "your great experience was only once?!" and "Thank God I know nothing of that") .

I wasn't expecting the kissing! And of course Nicolò put a stop to that - you're so going to regret it, Nico. I'm calling it now.

Thank you so much for this beautiful chapter!
From: (Anonymous)
I will definitely try to work it in somewhere. :)

Ahaha, no, Leandro and Lazzaro are totally different, so one might expect them not to have confusingly similar names, huh? But it's too late now, so that will have to wait for the AO3 edit. *facepalm* (Leandro is in fact only guilty of being kind of a moron about relationships, which is forgivable for reasons that should show up in the next part. (We can't really blame him for falling for Nicky, I guess.) Lazzaro on the other hand was just a fucking douche.)

Thank you so much, I'm very proud of that earthquake line tbh.

I wasn't actually expecting to put the kissing in - there was that line in the prompt about maybe it's The Last Thing, but then I was writing it, and was like '...all of Joe's previous sexual experience involved kissing, like, heavily', it's kind of just what you do, for him? And it moved the scene where I wanted it. But I touched on the bonus part! :)

(So much to regret, when you live forever. Just imagine being married to someone who NEVER LETS YOU HEAR THE end of your dumbass relationship decisions for, like eight hundred years! For instance.)
From: (Anonymous)
Hey, it might be my prompt, but it's absolutely YOUR story! Feel free to mix it up however you think it works best!

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