Fills Post
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This Fills Post is now closed to new fills. New fills should go in Fills Post #2.
Fills can but don't need to be anonymous.
Start a new comment for each fill. Don't use threaded comments for new fills. Threaded comments are for fills that take up more than one comment field, or for feedback/squee/praise.
In your fill, please mention the prompt you are responding to, and provide a link to the prompt in the body of the text.
Please use a header with your character(s)/pairing and a title and/or keyword or short phrase. (For example: "Just you and me: Andy/Quynh, Make-up sex" or "Between a Rock and A Hard Place: Nicky/Joe/Booker, first time DP").
Please also comment with a link to your fill in the prompt post, under the prompt you are responding to. Your comment header should include the word "Fill" or "Filled", so that those checking out the thread can find your fic/art more easily (For example: "FILL: Re: Any/Quynh, Make-up sex").
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Re: FILL: Joe/Nicky, Arranged Marriage AU, Returning Home, Revenge (2/2)
Date: 2020-10-08 10:03 am (UTC)Hooooooooooly shit, you DELIVERED! Seriously, what a fantastic fill. First, I loved that it was entirely from Marco’s POV, I love outsider POV so that in itself was such a massive thrill! The relationship between Nicky and Joe was wonderful, the way Marco would slowly figured out its layers. Loved that bit when he was spying on them, that was actually quite funny, Marco’s thoughts made me snicker more than once. I loved that you didn’t made the brothers cartoonish villains, sure they are assholes but they aren’t EVIL, just callous and you showed they learned their lesson at the end. The meeting between Nicolò and his mother at the end was wonderful too!!
Overall, what a great fanfic. It made me want to know MORE about this world, like, how did Nicolo and Yusuf fell in love. That in itself would be such a compelling story!
Thank you so much!!!!!!!
Re: FILL: Joe/Nicky, Arranged Marriage AU, Returning Home, Revenge (2/2)
Date: 2020-10-09 04:46 am (UTC)