I’m sorry to hear this past month has been hard, I hope it gets better. Regardless, I hope you’ll continue writing – I think I said it before, but if this is you on your first smut tries, I might die of overheating when you find your rhythm lol. Here're my line reactions!
I love these opening lines.
The description of being cold, wet, and miserable and just wanting to be dry and warm again is such a throwback to my rowing days! XD
dying @ joe being like “staring into the fire together and jerking off together are totes the same thing”
He runs his thumb over the head of his cock and groans appreciatively in that way Nicoló seems to like. His reward is a quiet moan omg they’re totally performing for one another aaaahhhh these fools!!
w o w @ joe waxing poetic about Nicky’s orgasm face by firelight. Also I love that Joe’s wonder and awe for Nicky shines throughout this chapter.
OMG they made eyecontact!! and then they said each other’s names!! ahhhhhh
I love Nicky tossing his blanket off for Peak Drama and Driving Joe Nuts.
the fire is dancing on Nicoló’s skin but it is inside Yusuf’s love this line
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Re: Give An Inch (Fall A Mile): Joe/Nicky, Moving Goalposts (3b/?)
Date: 2020-10-12 04:49 am (UTC)I love these opening lines.
The description of being cold, wet, and miserable and just wanting to be dry and warm again is such a throwback to my rowing days! XD
dying @ joe being like “staring into the fire together and jerking off together are totes the same thing”
He runs his thumb over the head of his cock and groans appreciatively in that way Nicoló seems to like. His reward is a quiet moan
omg they’re totally performing for one another aaaahhhh these fools!!
w o w @ joe waxing poetic about Nicky’s orgasm face by firelight. Also I love that Joe’s wonder and awe for Nicky shines throughout this chapter.
OMG they made eyecontact!! and then they said each other’s names!! ahhhhhh
I love Nicky tossing his blanket off for Peak Drama and Driving Joe Nuts.
the fire is dancing on Nicoló’s skin but it is inside Yusuf’s
love this line