I was the prompter and I just threw the idea out there on a whim not expecting anyone to pick it up because it's a bit concept-heavy rather than porn-heavy, so I am eternally grateful to you, dear writer. This is a fantastic start and you packed so much into a short space. Andy really perfect here, the idea that even when Nicky was a newbie she was already the Andy we know now, deeply caring but also HARD, not as an affectation but just as an effect of being how old and battle-worn she is. She's practical and beyond the human concept of time already, "I know a man.” She shrugs contemplatively. “Or I did. It’s been a while. If he’s dead, we’ll find another way.”. She's divine. And you managed to touch on Nicky's evolving relationship with the church and his part in the crusades, which--again, this is such a short part 1! You got so much in there!
And of course poor Joe, who doesn't understand what's happening and maybe doesn't even know help is coming. The dreams are two-way but there's no way for him to know Andy and Nicky aren't some afterlife apparitions or something. But even in his suffering he managed to take out two of his tormentors, and that is the kind of initiative that deserves to be rewarded!!! With the rescue and comfort you have promised, of course.
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Re: FILL: even on the darkest nights [Joe/others, forced prostitution, non-con & rescue] 1/
Date: 2020-08-08 03:35 am (UTC)And of course poor Joe, who doesn't understand what's happening and maybe doesn't even know help is coming. The dreams are two-way but there's no way for him to know Andy and Nicky aren't some afterlife apparitions or something. But even in his suffering he managed to take out two of his tormentors, and that is the kind of initiative that deserves to be rewarded!!! With the rescue and comfort you have promised, of course.