Marco is really shining in this fic, in a very face-palm inducing kind of way. Also, I couldn't help but notice that Nicolò's family seems healthier with his father dead early...
The last paragraphs - Nicolò taking one thing for himself and planning to cherish the memory, thinking that "Tayyib"is using him as a rebound and being fine with that- were heart wrenching. I'm all teary eyed.
I feel I'm missing a couple of steps in between, but it's probably just me. Great work!
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Re: FILL: Joe/Nicky, Joe/Other - arranged marriage V. marriage for love (4/5)
Date: 2020-11-10 11:01 am (UTC)The last paragraphs - Nicolò taking one thing for himself and planning to cherish the memory, thinking that "Tayyib"is using him as a rebound and being fine with that- were heart wrenching. I'm all teary eyed.
I feel I'm missing a couple of steps in between, but it's probably just me. Great work!