theoldguardkinkmeme: (Joe and Nicky 2)
theoldguardkinkmeme ([personal profile] theoldguardkinkmeme) wrote2020-07-22 10:07 am

Fills Post

This Fills Post is now closed to new fills. New fills should go in Fills Post #2. For those of you who are in the process of posting multi-chapter WIPs, please post subsequent chapters in the new Fills Post but include a link to the previous chapters so that those who haven't been following the story from the beginning can easily find the first part(s). 

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Re: Give An Inch (Fall A Mile): Joe/Nicky, Moving Goalposts (3b/?)

(Anonymous) 2020-10-12 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Prompter again

While daily updates would be great, please take care of yourself first. RL happens.
I am so sorry about your coworker! That's terrifying. I hate that there are people like that customer walking around, and even more that I can't use a time machine to drop them in the middle of a World War I battlefield.

I loved the beginning! You did a great job describing how cold, wet and miserable they are - so many great details! I swear I started to feel colder, too, it was that effective.
The way Yusuf and Nicolò talk to each other is just perfect, too - just the right tone of teasing. You have their voices down really well! Nicolò wanting to see him as an old man (or as close as it gets) was sweet.

The next part, oh wow, the next part! That was so hot... *deep breaths*

I was blown away by the use of firelight: Yusuf getting lost in how beautiful Nicolò looks, the way you describes the light and shadows (the night brushed fingers against his face!), the putting on a show bit, Yusuf who wants to draw this moment... They said each other's name! It's all just amazing.

I'll be rereading this story a lot, just so you know. You are truly a great writer.

Re: Give An Inch (Fall A Mile): Joe/Nicky, Moving Goalposts (3b/?)

(Anonymous) 2020-10-13 07:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. <3 The drama in my life is all of the 'people-being-shitty-to-each-other' variety, which is unpleasant, but does mean that the only thing really stopping me writing is being tired from work sometimes. So I'm not going to beat myself up if updates aren't daily (does anything ever go as fast as the first two chapters of a thing? Research says no), but I am aiming for fairly quick updates.

Gaaaaah, that is such a great compliment. (I mean, not that I wanted to make you cold and miserable or anything, but you know.) I am so happy I'm flailing a little bit. Everything in this makes me so happy. (I grew up with a lot of fires, in and out of the house, so I had a really clear picture of how everything would look because of that, and I'm so so glad I managed to convey that, eee!)

Have I mentioned I love your comments? I love your comments.