OP! Hooooooooooly shit, you DELIVERED! Seriously, what a fantastic fill. First, I loved that it was entirely from Marco’s POV, I love outsider POV so that in itself was such a massive thrill! The relationship between Nicky and Joe was wonderful, the way Marco would slowly figured out its layers. Loved that bit when he was spying on them, that was actually quite funny, Marco’s thoughts made me snicker more than once. I loved that you didn’t made the brothers cartoonish villains, sure they are assholes but they aren’t EVIL, just callous and you showed they learned their lesson at the end. The meeting between Nicolò and his mother at the end was wonderful too!! Overall, what a great fanfic. It made me want to know MORE about this world, like, how did Nicolo and Yusuf fell in love. That in itself would be such a compelling story! Thank you so much!!!!!!!
Re: FILL: Joe/Nicky, Arranged Marriage AU, Returning Home, Revenge (2/2)
Hooooooooooly shit, you DELIVERED! Seriously, what a fantastic fill. First, I loved that it was entirely from Marco’s POV, I love outsider POV so that in itself was such a massive thrill! The relationship between Nicky and Joe was wonderful, the way Marco would slowly figured out its layers. Loved that bit when he was spying on them, that was actually quite funny, Marco’s thoughts made me snicker more than once. I loved that you didn’t made the brothers cartoonish villains, sure they are assholes but they aren’t EVIL, just callous and you showed they learned their lesson at the end. The meeting between Nicolò and his mother at the end was wonderful too!!
Overall, what a great fanfic. It made me want to know MORE about this world, like, how did Nicolo and Yusuf fell in love. That in itself would be such a compelling story!
Thank you so much!!!!!!!