Prompt poster here - OHMYGOD!!!!! This was amazing! (I'm really trying not to write this in all caps, but it's hard)
It's perfect. Just perfect. I loved everything - the bad day that starts it all, Yusuf’s POV, his irritation and frustration, the whole "I want more but I don't want this to end"... it's all so beautiful I could cry. Literally.
Thank you, thank you, thank you,thank you! I don't have enough words to tell you how grateful I am. (Also, I so hear you on the difficulties of writing porn. You are doing great, though!)
Re: Give An Inch (Fall A Mile): Joe/Nicky, Moving Goalposts (1/?)
It's perfect. Just perfect. I loved everything - the bad day that starts it all, Yusuf’s POV, his irritation and frustration, the whole "I want more but I don't want this to end"... it's all so beautiful I could cry. Literally.
Thank you, thank you, thank you,thank you! I don't have enough words to tell you how grateful I am.
(Also, I so hear you on the difficulties of writing porn. You are doing great, though!)
Thank you again.