I cannot tell you just how perfectly your comment was calculated to make me happy; realism is the other reason this took so long, because I would write two sentences and have a crisis about if they made sense. (*insert joke here about how actually it just took me two weeks to edit out the excessive semicolons*)
I may go revisit that part to make it clearer - the intention was that he's being tempted because of that.
Re: Give An Inch (Fall A Mile): Part 8/?
I may go revisit that part to make it clearer - the intention was that he's being tempted because of that.
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